In the Penal Colony

Here is a link to the video that we watched in class.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=StwAGxbPxlU

Here are some suggestions that could have been done differently in my opinion:

1. I was not impressed with the machine. I had this image as I was reading the story about the machine. From reading I thought it was suppose to be a bed of cotton on the ground, and the man was stripped naked and place on his stomach while the harrows enscribed the message on the man's back.

2. The script could have been better. There were a lot of details that were left out. I understand it was a low budget film, but some of the information they leave out is pertinent to the story line.